Chapter 5

Another chapter down. This is the first time in a while I’ve managed to have enough time during a weekday to get much done. I’m pretty sure that’s it for today. I need to come up with a title for this thing soon.

Chapter 3 done (maybe)

I moved about half of Chapter 3 to a spot later in the book, and rewrote the remains around it. The chapter that remains is a bit shorter than I’d like, but I’m not seeing any obvious way to remedy it, so it’s done for now. We’ll see what happens when I drop the other section back in.

Chapter 2 Revised

I got 24 pages revised. Not great, but it’s a start. That covers up to the end of Chapter 2. I removed a large section that was slowing things down.

I hoped to do more, but there a large section of Chapter 3 that needs to be moved to a later chapter, and I can’t find my stack of notecards for it. That’ll teach me to clean my desk! Hopefully I’ll get more time this afternoon and tackle the next bit. For now I’ve read it over so I can bounce it around in my head while doing other things.

Stories to Share

Glenstal monk shows his cards

These are the things I read online this week that I feel are worth sharing.