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	<title>Comments on: One Pass Revision: Day 12 Slog Complete</title>
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		<title>By: Sonya Says</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sonya Says</dc:creator>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;What to do with that first draft...&lt;/strong&gt;

So, writing the first draft may have seemed hard work. But when you&#8217;ve done it, you&#8217;ll find out that the real work is just about to begin: you have to revise that masterpiece of yours. Here&#8217;s what Ernest Hemingway said about the first...</description>
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<p>So, writing the first draft may have seemed hard work. But when you&#8217;ve done it, you&#8217;ll find out that the real work is just about to begin: you have to revise that masterpiece of yours. Here&#8217;s what Ernest Hemingway said about the first&#8230;</p>
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