Comments on: 1-Pass Day 15: (12485/99973) http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/08/26/1-pass-day-15-1248599973/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=1-pass-day-15-1248599973 Jason Penney's thoughts on writing, life, and other stuff Thu, 22 Jul 2010 18:32:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Jay http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/08/26/1-pass-day-15-1248599973/comment-page-1/#comment-9617 Jay Mon, 28 Aug 2006 01:11:26 +0000 http://jasonpenney.net/archives/2006/08/26/1-pass-day-15-1248599973/#comment-9617 My first draft had very long chapters. During the slog I marked new, shorter chapters. I also entire sections for removal (note that my total word count is dropping with each post). The combination is leaving me with some chapter that are quite a bit shorter than I expected. Once I finish the type in I can always move a few things around. Rachel was doing much better today, thanks. My first draft had very long chapters. During the slog I marked new, shorter chapters. I also entire sections for removal (note that my total word count is dropping with each post). The combination is leaving me with some chapter that are quite a bit shorter than I expected. Once I finish the type in I can always move a few things around.

Rachel was doing much better today, thanks.

]]> By: Del http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/08/26/1-pass-day-15-1248599973/comment-page-1/#comment-9602 Del Sat, 26 Aug 2006 23:03:28 +0000 http://jasonpenney.net/archives/2006/08/26/1-pass-day-15-1248599973/#comment-9602 Short chapters are nice when reading (I think) gives you the feeling you've accomplished something. Hope Rachel feels better soon. Short chapters are nice when reading (I think) gives you the feeling you’ve accomplished something. Hope Rachel feels better soon.

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