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	<title>Comments on: 1-Pass Day 19: (25233/99124)</title>
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		<title>By: S William Shaw</title>
		<link>http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/09/08/1-pass-day-19-2523399124/comment-page-1/#comment-9944</link>
		<dc:creator>S William Shaw</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Sep 2006 05:17:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I couldn&#039;t imagine staring face to face with a manuscript of that length.</description>
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		<title>By: Jay</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jay</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Sep 2006 00:27:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sounds like you&#039;re making good progress.  Keep it up.

It&#039;s not nearly 1000 pages.  I think I&#039;d be going ever more nuts if it was.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds like you&#8217;re making good progress.  Keep it up.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s not nearly 1000 pages.  I think I&#8217;d be going ever more nuts if it was.</p>
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		<title>By: S William Shaw</title>
		<link>http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/09/08/1-pass-day-19-2523399124/comment-page-1/#comment-9928</link>
		<dc:creator>S William Shaw</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Sep 2006 05:12:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks. I am 80% done with my first revision, and then will make a last minute read through to catch any biggies I missed.

That picture is intimidating. It makes me think of those 1000 page L. Ron Hubbard books that used to clog the bookshelves at Waldenbooks. I can&#039;t imagine how L. Ron edited a bulk like that. Him and Stephen King must have a secret method to stay sane.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks. I am 80% done with my first revision, and then will make a last minute read through to catch any biggies I missed.</p>
<p>That picture is intimidating. It makes me think of those 1000 page L. Ron Hubbard books that used to clog the bookshelves at Waldenbooks. I can&#8217;t imagine how L. Ron edited a bulk like that. Him and Stephen King must have a secret method to stay sane.</p>
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		<title>By: Jay</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jay</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Sep 2006 00:21:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes it feels like one.  In fact, it kind of &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.jczorkmid.net/~jpenney/blog/archives/2005/07/27/the-first-draft/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;look like one&lt;/a&gt;.  It&#039;s not too bad.  Best of luck with your revisions.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes it feels like one.  In fact, it kind of <a href="http://www.jczorkmid.net/~jpenney/blog/archives/2005/07/27/the-first-draft/" >look like one</a>.  It&#8217;s not too bad.  Best of luck with your revisions.</p>
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		<title>By: S William Shaw</title>
		<link>http://jasonpenney.net/blog/2006/09/08/1-pass-day-19-2523399124/comment-page-1/#comment-9900</link>
		<dc:creator>S William Shaw</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Sep 2006 05:26:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Looking at your &quot;type in&quot; bar above makes me wish I was finished editing my novel. My book is a YA, and only 45k words. 100k seems like a mountain to edit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Looking at your &#8220;type in&#8221; bar above makes me wish I was finished editing my novel. My book is a YA, and only 45k words. 100k seems like a mountain to edit.</p>
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