One Pass Revision: Day 3 (46/563)
Manuscript Slog Page Count
46/563
Had a really busy weekend, but I finally was able to get some time in tonight… err.. this morning. Fairly heavy rewrites. Changed the point of view on a number of scenes. I removed a few scenes and was able to replace them with only a sentence or two in a later scene. I like some of the stuff I cut, but it really didn’t fit anymore. I wrote a few new scenes as well. I’ll need to review them before moving on, but I’m too tired to do that right now.


Lord Foul’s Bane (The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever, Book 1)
Playing for Keeps
Rogue Squadron (Star Wars: X-Wing Series)
Old Man’s War

