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One Pass Revision: Day 5 | All the Billion Other Moments (Jason Penney) · All the Billion Other Moments (Jason Penney)

One Pass Revision: Day 5

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Reached the end of Chapter 5 (not that the existing chapter breaks are going to mean much of anything). I’m surprised how easy it is to brutally remove entire scenes, ones I loved when I wrote them, and replace them with a single line somewhere else. Some of the POV adjustments are a bit more time consuming.

I hope to get back to this today, but I’ve got a lot of other stuff to get done, so no promises.