One Pass Revision: Day 5
Manuscript Slog Page Count
98/563
Reached the end of Chapter 5 (not that the existing chapter breaks are going to mean much of anything). I’m surprised how easy it is to brutally remove entire scenes, ones I loved when I wrote them, and replace them with a single line somewhere else. Some of the POV adjustments are a bit more time consuming.
I hope to get back to this today, but I’ve got a lot of other stuff to get done, so no promises.
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